Ash's story,,enjoy..

hey guys,this is bout a story that i wrote...i hav no idea whether it's good anot...pls comment bout it...
the "hush frenziez":
it's freshmen year(i guess??),this is a story bout a few students..girls and boys..they transfered to Chagfurd High in 7th gred...there's 17 particular main characters consisting:ashley thorre(me),janice wong(zw),elaine chris(yee leng),eunice rye(foo shu juin),phoebe roldan(loisy),amanda michael(amanda liew),stephanie nishizawa(sze swan),bryan third,aiden kean,ian robert,kyler jaysean,zachary lane,alex ken,benjamin kim,evan henry,ryan thorre,jonathan thorre...these guys suddenly face alot..of trouble...(my guess is to make things more interesting??)anyways...troubles kept coming...will they be able to face them?or...they ..die? READ IT!!!!!!

COMBINATION:tragedy,love,humor,war,crime,school life...so on so forth...?
Author:Elizabeth Chin Yin aka Ashley Thorre, Ryoko Jimyoin~
(pls comment--thnx,end of subject)
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